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Beat for the Stranger

Posted by Cyberdevil - October 24th, 2009


Even strangers feel the beat
Even strangers flee defeat
Even strangers need to eat
Even strangers move their feet

Even strangers get a chance
Even strangers like to dance
Even strangers need romance
Even strangers lack demands

Even strangers clap their hands
When the world is strange and sad
To the strangers in my land
Here's a beat, a beat to be

A beat to guide you, to sit beside you
To let you fly, to lead your mind
To better thoughts, to free the binds
That blind you, let the beat find you

Stranger.
Poetry by Me


Comments

Nice poem, but I don't like the use of the same words that many times.
The last verse is really good.
Also you don't have to make the word at the end of every line rhyme and it is often better to spread the rhyming out more.

Thanks, yeah, this one is a bit repetetive.